I talk less with people but I am not shy,
I have a soft corner, which is hard but not so dry,
I like people with personality but I never pry,
I have feathers of thought but I can’t fly,
I have tears in my eyes but I can’t cry,
I have guts deep within but I can’t try,
Can anyone make me understand Why? Why? Why?
This may be the reason I titled this poem untitled-why?
(To all those who want to know Me & my inner conscience)
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I believe everyone of us can relate to your lines as we all possess an imaginative mind that tries to fly across the boundaries imposed by our physical world…
We all seek answers to all these ‘whys’
We fail to notice how life passes us by
All life long, we continue to ponder
Until the day, to death, we surrender… 🙂
I try try try
But still can’t make the sky
always leaves me wonderin why
is this the way i’ts goin to be till i die?
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hmmm… nice 🙂
i keep the truth to myself
and i tell you a lie
i cover the darkness, put you to sleep
with a sweet lullaby.. then..
then i fly
with my thoughts – high… high above the sky
when i’m alone, i cry
if you don’t stop me, i’ll surely try
if you don’t laugh at me
i won’t pretend to be shy
but then…
when i try to find
a soul that can understand me
i can’t!
i try to give a title
to my otherwise wasted life
i can’t
why?
🙂
Darkness at the break of noon
Shadows even the silver spoon
The handmade blade, the child’s balloon
Eclipses both the sun and moon
To understand you know too soon
There is no sense in trying………
BOB DYLAN(it’s alright ma)
Just 8 lines, but speaks millions!!
Good one Mr Sensible 🙂
I also find myself in between those lines… Seems like everyone can search himself/herself in these 8 lines..Lovely
i second it… found myself in between those lines….
Don’t know why….In fact I identified myself in your lines… So ‘m also asking ..Why..?? ❗ ❓