I’m at this side, and you are at the other
But we pretend, this distance doesn’t bother
You are a distant cry,
Though how much I try – to reach you!
Repressed feelings – never revealed
But deep down, they get piled up
Stories from your side – still unheard,
Confessions to be made – yet undisclosed
My subliminal expectations for your approach
Fades away as time erodes!
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Absolutely lively and well expressed. Great one
C-roo – explode of feelings
Touching poem..keep writing dear.
Touching poem..keep writting dear.
good poem , touched the inner heart.
m stunned by ur excellence.
echoes of silence is murmuring in my mind.
स्तब्ध भये म त|
प्रत्येक बिंदु मा वास्तविकता को स्पर्स छ|
m stunned by ur excellence.
echoes of silence is murmuring in my mind.
स्तब्ध भये म त|
प्रत्येक बिंदु मा वास्तविकता को स्पर्स छ|
nice explode of feelings in the few compressed letters, yet impressive and fusion of mix of mind and the cries of heart stills remains.
Nice intellectual piece.
Keep it up.
There’s clarity of emotions in the way you express… less details makes it even better.. there’s no mention of where the bridge is, if the bridge is broken or not, who is standing on the other side, what happened in the past.. but the poem touches your heart when you read it…like you had experienced the similar kind of feeling.. as if there’s something very important that you can relate to it… is a great poem.. appreciated!!
“My subliminal expectations for your approach
Fades away as time erodes!” – the best part!! very thoughtful!!
Yes Heretic, he told my vibe also. The yellow bridge that connects hetauda to kulekhani side, or the Birot ko bato side ..
Damn, C-roo! You told the story of my life!! Daami!!!