Hey Rainbow!
I know,
you shine for me.
While the crowd goes crazy,
by the rhythm of your hues,
your eyes are always searching for me.
You want me to be
the other half-circle of you.
And I want to see
all my happiness in you.
I get burned,
when lustful clouds surround.
I get drenched,
when your tears rain down.
I know,
you stole all those colors
to blend our dreams with it.
And you painted it all over you,
to be my mirror spirit.
But still rainbow,
You shine high above the sky,
I creep on the ground.
It hurts to know that
rainbow never shines in a round.
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Nice Job….. few ppl are littering EU with meaningless Picnic stuffs…but I’m sure EU also has talented and creative contributers… keep it up my friend…want to see more frm you….
where are your other paintings dreamsky?
I see a dead body on the ground !
Is he already dead? Is his spirit singing this rainbow song for her?
Mysterious enough. loved it completely.
Very Ingenious, Very Real- “It hurts to know that
rainbow never shines in a round”.
I loved it!!! DreamSky, is truly full of life.
i wonder how this dreamsky guy manages to be so multitalented!
Thank you all for appreciating my brief exploration into the other half-circle of rainbow. I used to be fascinated by her incompleteness since my childhood.
Maybe the charcoal, who only knows the color black, does not deserve that colourful world – although they share the same canvas and sometimes she even loves to walk along the path charcoal sketches.
Perhaps the beauty of the rainbow lies in the fact that she is single, incomplete – continuously missing the other half-circle.
And Sudip u r right 🙂 I was thinkin of THAT ‘time capsule’ from My Sassy Girl, while sketching that tree. Think how often do we get chance to see the rainbow ❓
Nice poem D !!!
well that tree reminds me of My Sassy Gril .. is that the same tree that u have painted ?
grrr8 sketch !!! 10 on 10 buddy ———-
my bro’s always best (y) 😛
AWESOME !!!! I do agree wid gr8 . Everything is just greaattttttttt . Beautiful flow of painted dream in words. 😉 😀
Awesome Sketch!! The poem compliments the composition of ART.
i liked the use of birds for eyes…nice 🙂
Visual Effect.. Nice man. loved the color of Rainbow
DreamSky painting is GREAT!
I guess the half circle of the rainbow is preseted in the poem.
Check the allignment of the text its curved so it represents the half circle of the rainbow
so by joining two half circles it will create a full circle rainbow ..
🙂
good one and nicely presented 😐
very insightful… the observation is great… everyone sees it but nobody notices “rainbow never shines in a round.” nice one…
the art of shape poetry with colors of rainbow…cheers man!!
Awesome!!!
Gr8 poetry and the paint
nice presentation of art in words
DreamSky is really dreaming of sky and the soul..
hope to see lot more paintings from DreamSky
nice!
love the painting! awesome – mind blowing.