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Is It YoU or Is It Me?

Don’t you still believe me?

That my feelings for you are so true.

Don’t you still wanna talk to me?

About why you are feeling so blue.

I can’t compel you to do so,

Nor can I stand to see you feeling low.

Sitting side by side one another

Why don’t I feel, us being together?

Did I do anything wrong?

Couldn’t I stand up to your expectations?

Punish me, scold me

If I did you wrong.

But don’t torture me

With that heart-breaking look

With that ear-piercing silence

And that indifferent behavior

That bleeds me to death

Just know this

And that this is true

I do love you

And I know, so do you

Then what is it that’s stopping us

Is it me or is it you???

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  6. Nice…These lines are simply awesome …………..

    “Sitting side by side one another
    Why don’t I feel, us being together?”………..

  7. I have read this post more than just once and trust me i could feel the feel of both- ‘You’ and ‘me’, Coz I have been ‘You’ many times. and it’s really hurtful to express how ‘me’ should have felt. 🙁

  8. It’s so nice to read poetry that can be spoken out, read aloud…

    “Is it me or is it you???” Its just these three things : misunderstandings, misunderstandings and misunderstandings 🙂

    cheers!

  9. I do love you
    And I know, so do you
    Then what is it that’s stopping us
    Is it me or is it you???

    nice

    i’d like to add some for my sweetie

    Its niether me
    nor its you
    its just our perception
    dragging us through

    Forget the pain
    leave the tears
    Hold my hands
    and say ‘i love you’

  10. Goodness gracious me!!! The theme of my next poem is captured here…haha was just about to post it today.. “Screams of Silence” – ear-piercing silence hehe..

    Nice one Jane!! 🙂

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